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Book Two: The Smoking Monk

 
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 11:42 pm    Post subject: Book Two: The Smoking Monk  Reply with quote

The title is revealed for my second book, which i am up to chapter 7 of. The story continues months after the first novel and centers mostly on Wun Lung, The Smoking Monk
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have a great idea for a character. This character would have a pretty face and be mostly untouchable. Thus, is why his face stay's so pretty.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Give me more details, Ht Wgt, wepon of choice etc
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 1:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

He'd be an evil tyrant. Prob the emperor of all the bad dudes ( taking this guy out would mean victory for the good guy's). Only problem is , this guy is the best of best. He easily manhandles your better characters and he demands respect.

He live's in awe of his beautiful face(like me lol). He's so fast and powerful opponents can't even get in close enough and hit his face. That in turn could be used as his weakness later on down the road.

Maybe a character could emerge from the good side to challenge ( Face). Face may even get cut or scared thus ruining his good looks and making him even more of an evil tyrant.

He's 6'7 , 400 pounds of pure solid muscle. He's been training all his life only to rule and conquer other men. He moves like the lighting and his skill is unmatched by anyone. He kills. He destroys. He eradicates. He doesn't negotiate!

Where Face is from grows a snake with the most lethal venom on the planet. He's grown immune to this venom and laces his weapons arrows, knifes, swords, etc with this venom. So not only do you have to deal with his skill, strength, and speed, but his opponents would need to consider the venom laced weapons.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 7:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A character like that would have to wait for the next trilogy. My first 3 books are kinda laid out already. Maybe i can hint at his renown growing in one of the books coming up

The main villain in the next book is near 7ft tall, invulnerable, he is The Master of the Coca, he can not be harmed by any weapon even magical ones ( to a certain degree)

The third book has The Opiate Master. The Deadly Addictions are the main characters for the first trilogy.

However i do like the premise of a warrior who is so good and pretty, that his face has never been touched or scarred. Now that i could include soon, even in the next book or two. Matter of fact in the next book The Master of the Coca uses an arena to challenge any and all, hoping to lure Wun Lung (Which he does) into a trap.

What if Face was a local hero who accepts the challenge, gets scarred and becomes a villain later down the road ( he would be the only hero to actually survive as he runs away after getting his face scarred) lol

But the main bad guy..hmmm i don't klnow about that...yet
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

^I've got a shit load of ideas for new characters. Don't know if you want them here or make a thread for new character ideas. Or simply just pm them to you.

Here's another

This will be an idea for a team of evil characters. A small group of the worst criminals and assassins in shaolin are put together by your main bad guy.

Then they are injected a super type serum ( like cap's) but the serum is based on genes from animals. So each man would be injected with a different animals super serum.

The serum does not change their physical appearance ( they would still look human). However, the man would have the main attribute of that animal and then trained to fight like that animal.

For example:

One may be injected with a chimps super serum and in turn that man would learn the fighting way of the monkey. Another may have the serum of a tiger and learn the ways of the tiger strike ( he could wear some special weapons simulating metal claws.

And so on and so on. You could use any animal.

The group can be called the zoo troopers.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2012 4:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The theme of my books is more medieval though the premise is still sound. magic and potions to bond a animal to a evil persons (s) giving them enhanced abilities
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 4:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do it !


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